Thoughts

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    Thoughts

    A rush of thoughts are racing
    Through my head
    Trying to think
    Trying to breathe
    Then everything goes black
    I hear screaming
    Cant move
    Scared out of my mind
    Immobilized by pain
    Blind by flashes
    Trying to move
    Cant see
    Trying to think
    Cant think

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    dahlusion commented on Thoughts

    03-17-2009

    Excellent write!

    mykhail commented on Thoughts

    03-06-2009

    Love the poem, great flow, but I want to know more, what happened? Gave it a 10, it is very creative, good job!

    SistaJessie commented on Thoughts

    03-06-2009

    i love this peom! its so expressive

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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