Thoughts

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Thoughts

crickets chirping
bull frogs croaking
breeze is blowing
moon is full

a beautiful night it is

for the night is my friend...when im the most free
the wind blowing soft on your face i will be
listening to the night...still full of life
it holds no sadness, fear, or strife

i close my eyes and listen to the sounds of the night
releasing my mind, i soar through the air, what a wonderful flight
i feel so free its a wonderful feeling
the natural high i get, and the joy of succeeding

no worries or sorrows do i feel at this time
only the magic of life in its prime
i dread not the battle for wich i will fight
i know i will win, success is in sight

just thoughts of my dreams im sharing with you
i know it, i see it, i'll make them come true

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Footprints2002 commented on Thoughts

03-15-2009

Great Job Another I love you can write and if anyone says you cant then they need to take a closer look. I also love the night. while everyone is in bed i can see the night as it is

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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