Thoughts..was it a dream...

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    Thoughts..was it a dream...

     Oh how you make me feel
    your words describe what I am missing-
    to be that intamate, beyond the skins' peel
    to reach inside, bringing passion to "exotic sensation !"

    I awoke + thought of, "YOU" !
           Chrisjan
        May 27, 2009

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    Aza commented on Thoughts..was it a dream...

    07-12-2009

    You prove you don't have to write a page to show depth, heart-felt meaning and stirring thoughts
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    Chrisjan

    07/13/2009

    That was very kind of you to say. You are very talented or gifted at writting !

    jlovett05 commented on Thoughts..was it a dream...

    05-30-2009

    i would have to say that i agree with what the other two people wrote as a comment this was very well written and it does speak volumes. good job
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    nik commented on Thoughts..was it a dream...

    05-30-2009

    to have someone that is on your heart and thoughts that strong is a beautiful think i like this it's simple and sweet but speaks loud great job
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    Tray4 commented on Thoughts..was it a dream...

    05-29-2009

    I like the fact that that your thought was given beyond skin deep,and how you described your emotions behind the thought of that person.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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