three, two, one

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I am looking for a man who will give me his heart and share my life and take my hand to be his wife. but there are three who I am talking to and I don't know which one to choose. I think I found him but not sure which, so God will have to tell me.

three, two, one

three hearts hoping
three sets of hands wide open
three new faces hoping to be the one

one who's searching
one who wants to know
which one will be forever
and which ones, say No.

three want a future
three want a life
one wants a husband
but three wants a wife

how does the one know what three will be the one
for three is too many, how do I pick just one.
they all stand for goodness
they all say they do
but one is all i want, not the other two

but the two I drop I don't know they all three sound the same
unless there is one who is playing at there game
the one is all a blunder, the one can't make them mind
for the three who come all seem to be the same kind

one wants to know
one don't want to wait
one wants to know now
before the ones too late

but three are standing there
three say they really care
so how does one figure out
the one amoung three.

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Tempestlady commented on three, two, one

08-21-2011

A test you see, that would be the thing to help you see which one stands out. Leave a 20 on the floor, see who nabs it and heads for the door, which one asks about you and what you know and who you knew. Hers's a catch who likes the same sports, and when she talks looks you in the eye. Which one makes your palms sweat, which one makes you crazy? which one is gone first thing and which one stays to be lazy? Just a few things one might consider when trying to decide. Have one come to your apt and wait for you then hide and see where or what she snoops into. Last but not least i know it may sound crude. Tell them all your secrets, bad habits, and past mistakes. Then see who doesn't get scared away. If they all do then that's why you couldn't choose, because she wasn't there. Write on ........................Tlady

Tempestlady

08/21/2011

Sorry its late I meant he. Tlady

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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This thing called love. 0
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what good is it 0
Mr. Sun 1
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Restoration 0
But God 3
Raging war 0
Peace be still 0
Midnight blue 1
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