Thunder Falls

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Political commentary, 'nuff said.

Thunder Falls

Thunder falls
And Angels crash
While those in doubt
Clean up the trash

Words unspoken & wars unseen
Mighty gods in bloody towers
Fill the spaces in between
And there reigns purple majesty
Mere outcasts of their travesty

Snapping jaws drip blue, white, red
Shadows eat their silohoutes
Until at last the beast is fed
Fow awhile it's hunger calmed
With 'we the people'
Still in it's palm

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FadingFebruary commented on Thunder Falls

09-22-2010

Awesome. Thought provoking and unique, and the meaning is slowly shown through the whole poem. The first stanza definately catches the readers' attention too. :] P.S. "SerenityWintirs" is also a pretty name.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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