THUNDERBOLT

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    A poem to remind us that we are one with nature.

    THUNDERBOLT

    In the abyss of my thought,

    I saw a thunderbolt.

    It draws a crooked line in the firmament,

    And sounds like a deafening agape.

     

    When your whip strikes,

    A sturdy tree will die.

    Every time you rumble,

    My eardrum will fall.

     

    When nature’s in rage,

    Everything will be sweep.

    If mankind don’t take hold of it,

    Everything will perish.


    ***09302009*** 

     

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    icu2 commented on THUNDERBOLT

    12-03-2009

    This is really good jammaekas! Good food for thought! Keep up the good work!
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    knight4696 commented on THUNDERBOLT

    10-24-2009

    Another Great Job Jammaekas! A very visually descriptive piece. Keep it up and you'll have the poetic community Thunderstruck!! :) Ken
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    jammaekas

    10/24/2009

    :))))Thunderstruck!!quite a word.. i often right poems with clear visual descriptions...next time i'll try to write a poem which will keep the readers thinking..

    nhorlandi commented on THUNDERBOLT

    09-29-2009

    this one is excellent, nicely written, nice choice of words, very smooth...only that it's a thunderbolt it rattles you when it strikes. I enjoyed the read. 10+
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    jammaekas

    09/29/2009

    thank u sir:) Yeah right i really fear thunderbolt that's why i wrote about it to overcome my fear:)))

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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