Til Then

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the last line isnt ment to be as it stands, i figured it would be better not to insert names...

Til Then

as the clock ticks by ive been wondering
why this world is painful, wounding?
cant we sing and enjoy our life?
no, instead we suffer, and try belief

my body aches from what this life forces me through
pushing me forward, telling me what to do
were all just alive, pushing forward
trying to live better, endured

rotten minds, rotten hearts
blood spills, bleeding starts
humanity is old, humanity is dead
no human is true, feathers of life we shed

my life, ive sworn to some one special
the feeling is there, were just mutial
i know she cant keep me, that i understand
but i still dream of her holding my hand

i forgive you, for the pain you put me through
for the future without me, i forgive you
one day i hope to hold your hand
til then, farewell until the end

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knight4696 commented on Til Then

02-16-2010

Evil ... not so Evil is this love poem of longing. Very nice write! :0 Ken

EvilPoems

02/16/2010

thanks ^.^

Starella15 commented on Til Then

02-12-2010

wow that was great. I love your writing. It is very emotional

EvilPoems

02/12/2010

only because i care so much for her ^.^

stever commented on Til Then

02-09-2010

dident really expect such a sweet write..from evil poems...nice,,stever

EvilPoems

02/10/2010

lol thank you again

EvilPoems

02/10/2010

My Love is simular to this one, im full of suprises

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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