Time to be.

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    Time to be.

    In a land not knowing what to do.
    we look to each other
    and see what we can't hide.
     Never understanding the truth of it to be.  Never looking out so far.
    Just trying to live a life to the end.
    well the end is near.
    so live it to the fullest rather than just to live. the point is not of that but of love.
    when u look at a person you can never
    truly understand the beauty of things in them.
    we never look to see what is all around.
    Look around and see what i see.
    When you look off to the sky.
    Stop and see the beauty all around the sea.
    The colors of the night.
    The darkness of the light.
    Take a walk out of lines.

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    cmlestrade commented on Time to be.

    02-13-2010

    This was truly lovely. You are so correct in looking to see the beauty that is often staring us in the face. good write.

    DeepEclipse commented on Time to be.

    02-12-2010

    Indeed. This reminds me of a quote that stated -intelligence sleeps and snores in libraries, while wisdom walks quietly everywhere-. So much is in the simple things overlooked. I like how this poem searches for that 4th dimension. Because it refuses to believe that what there is is all there is.

    bforibus commented on Time to be.

    01-03-2010

    i love the philosophy of this piece. its exactly what i say and feel everyday. its like my mantra. granted i do say the world is coming to an end a lil bit too much, but ppl need a wake up call immediately. great job on this

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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