time

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    time

    more time will pass,

    this feeling will go,

    smiling nervously,

    as i see your face,

    what do i say?,

    how do i react?

    maybe i am dreaming,

    and i'll wake,

    i want this to be true,

    your so good to me,

    your smiling back,

    you touch my face,

    you wipe my tears,

    i am learning to trust,

    its been a while,

    you move in closer,

    your lips on mine,

    i close my eyes,

    i relax,

    we pull apart,

    you called me Precious,

    and we have all the time we want.

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    Chaos128 commented on time

    12-16-2009

    A moment well worth building on; hope, vulnerability and anticipation together in a delicate, fragile package. Very well done!
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    jtmc4444 commented on time

    11-17-2009

    Real nice. Short-sweet and flows. I am happy to have had the chance to read your Poem. Have a great Tuesday.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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