To a time

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    To a time

    to a time

    if only i could change the hands of time

    i would go back to a time when people actually cared

    to a time when family actually stood for something

    to a time when mother and father instilled values and manners within their children

    to a time when music was music it spoke for you

    to a time when it didn't matter what color you wore or what hood you was from

    to a time when you could walk down the street and not worry about getting mugged or robbed

    to a time when laughter and happiness filled the air

    to a time where everyone can get along man can you remember those days

    to a time when crime was at its all-time low

    to a time when it was a blessing to have a baby instead of babies been born into a world crime and hatred

    to a time where my skin tone doesn't matter

    to a time where we can just be us

    man i only wish it was such a time


    the mysterious one

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    Worthless commented on To a time

    01-21-2011

    that's what I keep saying.. When will there ever be a time? I guess when we die and go to heaven is our only time..

    ApaqRasgirl commented on To a time

    08-11-2010

    that was brilliant dear, you told it so well, how we all wish we could have times like that again.......thanks for the great read........love asha

    cheronld commented on To a time

    08-11-2010

    Ok....I am intrigued young man....wait that makes me sound so old...lets try that again...I am so intrigued by the way you end your writes...I at first thought it a reference to that one particular poem but I see that is not so....that of course means I have some more reading to do to try and figure this out...lol...anywho...I too wish we could go back to certain times..and since we can't go back...welll....I pull out pictures of the three most important people in my life...my favorite nephew and favorite neices...when I do that I am in that certain time for that moment...this is a great poem.....Cher

    Rhymer commented on To a time

    08-11-2010

    To a time when all we had to do was reflect on a brighter tomorrow. Tomorrow came, unfortunately it does not shine as brightly as we imagined it would. Excellent thought provoking piece. 10

    Lolee commented on To a time

    09-17-2009

    That first impression we make will always tell a lasting story. That's just the way it is. So sad that so many were brought up in this world to see things through a warped glass. We must strive to be different from those that are a lesser life form, due to their hate and jaundiced opinions.. So sad. Great Poem!!!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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