to be like him

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    • reyjamiei
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    to be like him

    i am he who am not you
    i am the river that am not blue
    i am the birds that dive and fly and swim
    through a river of sky just to be like him.

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    dahlusion commented on to be like him

    02-12-2010

    poetic and creative through so little words and i love the flow the way it draws and leads and and builds into this.

    BringMeBullets commented on to be like him

    02-12-2010

    This is a good poem. I like how short it was. But it said a lot in the four stanzas. Great write.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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