TO CLIMB FROM BEHIND

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    A Sultry, Passionate Episode of  Adventuresome Proportions, ah  the Sport of Good Love Making Shared!

    TO CLIMB FROM BEHIND

    It took timing and skill


    To climb on up on her hill


    She moved and quaked


    Not being sure of what move to make


    This position could cause a stumble


    Or make her very walls tremble


    She continue to sway in a feisty way


    A further sign for me not to go all the way


    So we continue to swirl 


    Making sticky glue sounds of bronk and smack


    Smack and bronk and puuuu, puuu, pppppatttt


    Caused by increasing lubrication and moisturization


    One leg did quiver as moans caused me to climb quicker


    As I reared back, I almost slipped on a mini-geyser


    But thanks to my training as an expert hill climber


    I was able to reach around and grab her two soft hill patches


    The hill shook as I grabbed too hard, but not trying to slip


    Was my resolve, switching my climb by alternating legs


    She began to beg and her hill did crash into me and rise


    Turning around to peek that she was close to her peak


    As steam rises from cheeks to thighs, she began to cry


    Grabbing hair and shoulders, increasing intensity in motion


    I pushed her in one motion of pelvis, hips hand on shoulders


    down as the hill began to decline, with shouts of yeah! yeah!


    I collapsed as we both lay flat breathing and laughing


    At the sport of climbing from behind!

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    littleonyx commented on TO CLIMB FROM BEHIND

    08-08-2009

    Okay, one more time...I had to come back just one more time. DAMN!

    SILKYTWEED

    08/10/2009

    Ha, Ha, you making me blush...thanks for the revisit!! ONE

    littleonyx commented on TO CLIMB FROM BEHIND

    08-07-2009

    Well, damn. Um...damn. Damn. Damn. Damn. Damn. DAMN.

    SILKYTWEED

    08/07/2009

    My Sentiments exactly....thanks for the comment!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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