To Come Through.....

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All to familiar christmas story....PEACE

To Come Through.....

Spinning out of control

I planted my feet embracing

Mind still jettison thru expansion

Light speed travel forever and one day

Where is my satellite, I wander

Tethered to unseen abilities

Yet to fully manifest in fiscal responsibilities

Praying for Guidance in wisdom’s agility

How am I to accomplish xmas gift giving

For the sake of giving, not letting down family

My daughter wishes are prime in my design

So many wishes , my monetary fluidity in demise

Standing in the toy section for a girl’s doll inspection

She want’s Hannah, but I can hardly afford Barbie

Both lack correct cultural diversity or relativity

Let alone depressing more in this weakened economy

Demand is still at an all time high for my 8- year old ‘ eyes

So I submit and commit to this patriotic false tradition

Of coming thru with gifts for loved ones for Christmas!!!

 

HO-HUM, BAH-HUM-BUG!!!

 

Spinning  out  of  control  
I planted  my  feet  embracing
Mind  still  jettison  thru  expansion
Light  speed  travel  forever  and  one  day
Where  is  my  satellite,  I  wander
Tethered  to  unseen  abilities  
Yet  to  fully  manifest  in  fiscal  responsibilities
Praying  for  Guidance  in  wisdom’s   agility
How  am  I  to  accomplish  xmas   gift  giving
For  the  sake  of  giving,  not  letting  down  family
My  daughter  wishes  are  prime  in  my  design
So  many  wishes ,  my  monetary  fluidity   in  demise
Standing  in  the  toy  section  for  a  girl’s  doll  inspection
She  want’s  Hannah,  but  I can  hardly  afford  Barbie
Both  lack  correct  cultural  diversity  or   relativity
Let  alone  depressing  more  in  this  weakened  economy
Demand  is  still  at  an  all  time  high  for  my  8- year  old ‘  eyes
So  I  submit  and  commit  to  this  patriotic  false  tradition
Of  coming  thru  with  gifts  for  loved  ones  for  Christmas!!!
HO-HUM,  BAH-HUM-BUG!!!
Spinning  out  of  control  
I planted  my  feet  embracing
Mind  still  jettison  thru  expansion
Light  speed  travel  forever  and  one  day
Where  is  my  satellite,  I  wander
Tethered  to  unseen  abilities  
Yet  to  fully  manifest  in  fiscal  responsibilities
Praying  for  Guidance  in  wisdom’s   agility
How  am  I  to  accomplish  xmas   gift  giving
For  the  sake  of  giving,  not  letting  down  family
My  daughter  wishes  are  prime  in  my  design
So  many  wishes ,  my  monetary  fluidity   in  demise
Standing  in  the  toy  section  for  a  girl’s  doll  inspection
She  want’s  Hannah,  but  I can  hardly  afford  Barbie
Both  lack  correct  cultural  diversity  or   relativity
Let  alone  depressing  more  in  this  weakened  economy
Demand  is  still  at  an  all  time  high  for  my  8- year  old ‘  eyes
So  I  submit  and  commit  to  this  patriotic  false  tradition
Of  coming  thru  with  gifts  for  loved  ones  for  Christmas!!!
HO-HUM,  BAH-HUM-BUG!!!

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