to fall or not to fall 8-4-09

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    written udner stress to release the stress from within

    to fall or not to fall 8-4-09

    standing upon the bridge of life
    we find ourselves so full of strife
    we dont know just where to turn
    like a candle the wick is burned

    standing there across the sea
    our eyes out reach where we should be
    across the town which is lit real nice
    and think about the food and spice

    looking now where we have chalked
    our outlined body where we have walked
    the spirit looms into the night
    as a hoard of people rush in fright

    the see a mans body lifeless and limp.
    a rock across the water he did skip,
    a life from earth that now is strip.

    to close his eyes and fall from here,
    backwards unto the air he did disappear
    to all unknown upon the crashing waves
    to death we are just its mindless slaves.

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    WordSlinger commented on to fall or not to fall 8-4-09

    02-28-2010

    Very Gripful, I love this line~a rock across the water he did skip, , ty WS
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    Artie commented on to fall or not to fall 8-4-09

    10-18-2009

    This is an amazing piece. It is full of so much real, pure emotion. 10 from me
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    teasasue commented on to fall or not to fall 8-4-09

    09-11-2009

    wow, the pictures in my head this one brought, its so scary and real at the same time,
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    eileenj341975 commented on to fall or not to fall 8-4-09

    08-10-2009

    That was a great poem kittman, i enjoyed reading it. Keep up with your poetry.
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    am2anangel commented on to fall or not to fall 8-4-09

    08-04-2009

    I understand your frustrations and stress seaping out in this work. Sometimes it feels we are just deaths slaves; never truly knowing it's intentions, or when how where and why the end will come. Well done ; wish I could help you be less stressed in some way.
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