To Surrender

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  • Passion

    To Surrender

    Her lips full and tender.

    Her eyes glaze with passion.

    And she surrenders.

     

    His caresses turn possessive.

    He takes of her deep and fiercely.

    Her knees tremble with extacy.

     

    She surrenders her body to him.

    He takes what she willingly gives.

    A love long denied.

     

    They quench their thirst for each other.

    But only for this moment.

     

    For a thirst like this one,

    Is never quenched for long.

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    Rygar commented on To Surrender

    01-07-2010

    awesome write hun, i am going to indulge in some more of your writing!

    danmartyjake1 commented on To Surrender

    01-07-2010

    Certainly leads and leaves the reader wanting more. Great Writing!

    dahlusion commented on To Surrender

    10-14-2009

    An intimately sexy piece written with such confidence and erotic thirst, as if sneaking a read from your journal.

    StandingBear commented on To Surrender

    09-24-2009

    A long awaited, forbidden passion finally given and taken uninhibitively. Great write.

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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