To the sea

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    • ladydraeko
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    To the sea

     To the sea. Follow me

    Frenzy, Turbulence, Pandemonium
    Joy or misery. Follow me.
    Tranquility, Placidity, Serenity
    To the sea, Follow me.

    Commotion, Agitation, Confusion
    Bliss or grief. Follow me
    Delight, Fruition, Revelry
    To the sea, Follow me.

    To the sea, Follow me

    Sorrow, Melancholy, Remorse
    Delight or Lament. Follow me
    Satisfaction, Enjoyment, Contentment
    To the sea, Follow me

    Unsettled, Distressed, Overwrought
    Ecstasy or Distress. Follow me
    Charm, Pleasure, Enchantment
    To the sea, Follow me

    To the sea, Follow me

    Dismay, Chagrin, Trepidation
    Confidence or Humiliation. Follow me
    Jubilation, Bliss, Paradise
    To the sea. Follow me

    Upheaval, Restlessness, Distraction
    Tranquility or Agitation. Follow me
    Friendship, Love, Reconciliation
    To the sea. Follow me

    The choice is yours.
    Follow me, To the sea, To the sea
    JJB 6/5/09

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    NacolleMarie commented on To the sea

    06-17-2010

    ohh very well written! I have many written about the sea and the emotion in the movement of the waves,.. i need to post more soon, and spend more time reading your work.
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    mysticmynd commented on To the sea

    06-17-2009

    O my I think if I would have followed you to the see I'd be in a mental institute but I got it. Good work
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    carmentis commented on To the sea

    06-12-2009

    very good approach to the discriptive rendetioning of the sea as form but also i think metpohicaly speaking on trust and realionships
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    Allie commented on To the sea

    06-10-2009

    Wow I the the flow of this poem....It is complex yet simplistic...I love the fact we have choices...
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    Kelstorm commented on To the sea

    06-06-2009

    The sea is a reflection of the emotional self. Examining the adjectives you gave, is it any wonder a male mind has such a hard time swimming in the same waters of a female. While to a man, a storm at sea is mild, compared to a female's expression that enters mach-4 and 5 degrees strong. Everything is blown away. That's the sea for you
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