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    I spoke to God,
    Without much surprise, He told me he had fled
    On my knees, He told me that he left
    He’s out watching those ones that cared
    You were supposed to be my everything,
    But I made you my nothing

    So here it goes,
    So here we go…

    Now that you are nothing, I’m out to clear my head
    I am broken and I am calm,
    I need no one and no one will I call upon

    Don’t reach out your hand,
    It’s too much for me

    Don’t reach out your hand,
    I am not worthy

    I rather burn in hell,
    Than to lie to you again

    So here it goes,
    So here I stay…

    I’d decide never to look back
    But the past you are my faith

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    am2anangel commented on To

    01-03-2012

    "If you're not feeling as close to God as you used to. Guess who moved? " Just a little quote I felt applied to this write. Not sure if you're referring to help from God or someone who disappointed you. well structured piece. -Tonya
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    mustascheman commented on To

    12-27-2010

    "To"? Not finding the connection. I think I see in this one how you want to be alone but really you want someone to notice!? IDK ...that's what I got. Good job. A T.
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    koolmom0 commented on To

    06-14-2010

    God never leaves my friend....it's us who leave him. You did a great job at writing this. God Bless.....Kool
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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