Today I Heard The News

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I just wrote that because today I found out the treatments they are giving me for kidney rejection may not be working. I'm on my 3rd kidney transplant and they said this is my last one so hopefully this rejection episode passes quickly so I can finally go back to work and living my life the way I should be. Plus being out of work for a month and probably anoother 2 months makes you go nuts. Thank God for my son if it werent for him I would go nuts sitting at home all day!

Today I Heard The News

On the other end of the line I heard a voice
Fighting until the end or giving up right now is my only choice
Wishing all my pain would dissappear
When I think it's gone it suddenly reappears
                I must carry on and if I shall fall then I shall rejoice

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israelmorenike commented on Today I Heard The News

07-19-2009

This is very touching,you make me cry,please don't lose hope,God is able to do all things..The Lord is your strength,keep writting out your pains,God will sure hear you.I hold you dear to my heart,I don't know know but God knows you,he ordain and His Will shall be done in your life.I will keep praying for you.Be blessed.

latinangel commented on Today I Heard The News

07-06-2009

Very touching and real cowboy. I do like this. Can almost feel your emotions. Never give up! Latin Angel

scrye commented on Today I Heard The News

07-06-2009

As a liver cancer patient i feel your pain and can relate to your fight. Don't give up, Hope is a constant. Keep writing it truely helps us cope. Blessings to you luv.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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