today is the day

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    today is the day

     your love is a strong bond
    that can not be broken.
    its like flowers in a pond
    that can not be spoken.
    today is the day
    when you can say,i do
    after all we been through
    i'll love to hear you say it too.
    we came as two
    now we're one
    anything good thats happened
    can not be undone.
    we have different last names
    that we can put in love frames.
    thats especially made for us
    and the ones we love and trust.
    today is the day
    when i can say.
    our love is combined
    you are forever mine.
    i love you this much.
    you are such a beautiful soul
    that will make me forever whole.

    By: Cynthia jones

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    WarriorMonk commented on today is the day

    03-22-2010

    Whats wrong with appealing emotionally to your reader? I for one enjoy passion and emotion, Emotions are at the heart of the human condition. I love the line "anything that is good cannot be undone". A powerful statement which demonstrates the foundations your relationship is built on. Lovely write, I enjoyed the feelings shared
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    redbloodink commented on today is the day

    12-27-2009

    powerful............. I felt the emotion......... red
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    markrohaley commented on today is the day

    12-08-2009

    I believe to express emotion IS an art...and you are an artist! 10 amen!
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    kpeery09 commented on today is the day

    12-05-2009

    I love it...its very lovely and I also have to agree with kagenokitsune that it sounds like a good wedding vow.
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    KagenoKitsune commented on today is the day

    09-20-2009

    this sound like good wedding vow. very personal, not so good for sharring on internet i think. but is good wedding vow i thinks. persons who hear it very lucky.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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