together as one

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    together as one

    i watch you as you enter the room
    wearing what you know i like
    walkin over quietly, staring deep into my eyes
    soft hands caressing my delicate skin
    sliding the dress of my shoulders
    the silk fabric hits the floor as you begin kissing
    and caressing the rest of my flesh
    you slide off your shirt as you kiss me
    your pants are next to fall
    looking deep into your eyes
    knowing our love is always there
    i lay you down on the red satin sheets
    kissing every inch or ur soft flesh
    we wrestle around in the sheets
    kissing giggling at one another
    pulling the box ive hidden beneath the pillow
    i pull you in for a kiss but instead
    i hand you the small square box
    tears come to your eyes as you hold the ring
    smiling hapoly you say yes
    place it upon your finger
    then pull me for a gracious kiss
    tounges intertwining with one another
    embraces in each others arms
    our naked flesh together as one
    our bodies colliding
    making the sweetest sensation
    our chest rising and falling
    like that of the sun
    until finally we climax
    together as one
    together as one

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    Chaos128 commented on together as one

    10-01-2010

    A supremely memorable moment made immortal in verse. Tell me, how does it get any better than that? : )

    redbloodink commented on together as one

    11-29-2009

    I would like to just say... I got lost reading this..... I didn't think it was bad... I just had a hard time following it..... Red

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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