Together

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    Together

    don't ever think, im more than you deserve.
    you took a chance on a man, through his written words.
    you went with a feeling, an instict from within.
    and because of that, you derserve all that i am.
    many things sound corny, when they come from the heart.
    but my ground has been shaking, from the very start.
    i know what you mean, these new feelings we've found.
    they make my knees weak, and i fall to the ground.
    for us to do battle, and take on all that despise.
    im not scared of intruders, with you by my side.
    of course theres obsticles, many or few.
    but id climb the highest mountain, for one moment with you.
    youve stepped into my darkness, your my shinning light.
    and brought about something special, a feeling so right.
    i will be your rain in the desert, and your sun in the rain.
    i will fill your soul with pleasure, and never bring about pain.
    i take no offense, to the pain in your heart.
    i wish to make it better, and never be apart.
    new perception, much affection, and a new way to think.
    im so glad im the reason, and now you believe.

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    bforibus commented on Together

    01-24-2009

    yes, yes! caught the ghost at the end of that one

    mill6392 commented on Together

    01-23-2009

    i love this, i thought someone was this for me bit it turned out different. it really touched me and it wasn't corny at all

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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