Too Much

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Too Much

If i asked you to give me the world 
Before i could be your girl 
Give me all your riches before
I offer you some kisses 
would that be asking for too much?
If asked for you to take me shopping 
Then afterwords club hopping
Or if i asked you to fall madly in love with me
And carry me off into the sunset
Then would that be asking for to much?
Well all of those things were just to much
But ,i didn't ask you for any of it 
I just asked that you were here
That u were willing to try
I didn't ask you to die 4 me
Or to cut me open and watch me bleed 
I just simply wanted you to be happy
But that my friend 
Well , obviously, that was asking for too much!

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ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Too Much

12-05-2010

A powerful lesson here about self worth and asking for what you deserve and accepting nothing less. Many need to be warned. You are worth waiting for and working for. A wonderful write.........E

GucciGurl commented on Too Much

02-17-2010

This is so great. It is amazing how they cant do the simple things.

cmlestrade commented on Too Much

02-11-2010

Wow excellent write. Have you noticed when you don't ask for a thing you usually don't get a thing not even the respect you deserve. Let this be a lesson to all who have given and expected nothing in return.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

mcelvain’s Poems (26)

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The Collector 3
Where Were You? 5
Too Much 3
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those telemarketers 2
just a thought of many 0
Lovers Paradise. 0
Forgotten 1
accidental assassin 1
DARKNESS 0
TEST OF LOVE: R U READY? 1
PRETTY LITTLE PICTURES 0
3 TEARS 0
LOOKING FORWARD 0
ENGINE ENGINE 0
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GOOD NIGHT 0
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the rain 0
d telemarketers 0
darkness 0
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