Torn

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    Torn

    When a person is torn,they
    also have two thoughts,one
    is the right,the other mak-
    ing you distraught.

    Why even consider,a thought
    that is bad,even thinking it,
    puts you in a position,to be
    had.

    We have all made decisions,
    that turned out wrong in the
    end,have you ever thought
    what might,and could have
    been.

    So now you are torn,your
    decision on the floor,you
    have igniored the past,
    this bad decision before.

    When making a decision,
    there's always one right and
    a wrong,making the right
    choice,will help you go on,
    and forever belong.

    Also,the right choice will re-
    flect consenquences in a pos-
    itive light,choosing the wrong
    choice,will leave others in the
    dark,not wanting to be in
    your light.

    The right choice you make,can
    be positive and easily worn,the
    wrong choice you make,is the
    real feeling of torn.

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    knight4696 commented on Torn

    04-12-2010

    Nice job Intense .. Again, your context is always on point. Unfortunately some people never learn from their mistakes .. they just keep on repeating them expecting a different outcome? Go figure .. Anyway, again Nice Job! :) Ken

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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