Total Eclipse

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    Total Eclipse

    Total Eclipse

    For I shall be your sun

    shining in the day of night

    Incandescent glimmer of light

    Radiating for your eyes enchantment

     

    And you shall be my moon

    Shining in the multitude

    Luminous radiant shimmer of night

    splendid orb of my delight

     

    celestial beings

    Solar an lunar eclipse

    Glorious Sunset

    We explode and come together

    Intertwined in midnight madness

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    poett commented on Total Eclipse

    11-16-2013

    Nice write about the love you feel for someone. Its a magical thing to feel love inside your heart this way...
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    knight4696 commented on Total Eclipse

    06-08-2010

    Blue - Now this is a very sensual and romatic write my friend. I love the celestial flow ... Great Job! :) Ken
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    bluskyinthenite

    06/08/2010

    Thanks Ken.

    Teardrops commented on Total Eclipse

    06-07-2010

    Yes this was great loved it . Great flow and great write Marie
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    bluskyinthenite

    06/07/2010

    thanks Marie. Just sitting in the break room and thought this out. hmm Really.......................thanks for the 10

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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