Touching

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Touching

My days are consumed with thoughts.

Thoughts of you,
Thoughts of us,
Touching,
Holding,
Caressing,
Kissing;

Thoughts of desires and fantasies,
Thoughts that burn me insde with flames of desire,
Burning me up,
Tearing me down,
Consuming me,
Enveloping me in an inferno of desire with

Thoughts of you,
Thoughts of us,
Kissing,
Holding,
Caressing,
Touching . . .

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Mareann commented on Touching

01-02-2010

okay, I'm feeling this one too! very romantic poem, nice share --Mary

warsaw commented on Touching

08-26-2009

Thank you so much for sharing I loved and understood it sincerely WARSAW

Rendida commented on Touching

08-24-2009

the rate box isn't working I originally gave you a 10 but wouldn't let me slect that number or any number for some reason... then I just started clicking on numbers and it finally gave you an eight.... One other person it wouldn't let me me give a number at all...sorry but I loved your poem

Rendida

08/24/2009

not sorry that I loved your poem sorry that it only allowed me to rate it an 8 lol... i'm dug in deep aren't I ....I love your poetry

Rendida commented on Touching

08-24-2009

The all consuming flame of passion is one we all dream of getting daught up in.... short but elegantly done....

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

claytonbruster’s Poems (7)

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My Everything 4
Fleeting Thought 2
Since We Met 0
My Fantasy 0
Touching 4
You Were 0
Why? 1