Tranquility

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A Tongue Twister poem is made up of lines/verses that are hard to say when read aloud by using similar consonant sounds in succession (use of alliteration). In other words, the poem ties your tongue into knots. This form does not require end or internal rhyme.

Tranquility

Mystic moonlight, moments meet
Softly, someplace songbirds sweet
Simple, soothing, soulful sounds
Memories murmur, mossy mound
Wander wistful, winding ways
Loiter, loving, lilacs lay
Loafing langour, listless leaves
Weeping willow, wistful weave
Poised picture, pristine plain
Ruling romance, restive reign
Rising rapture, rustic ride
Perfect pleasure, peace presides...

By Michael Smith

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Kingwebstar commented on Tranquility

10-22-2012

I love your work .You're a excellent writer . Thanks for continue to post here and write cause this site wouldn't be the same without you. Love Da KinG

poeticmike

10/24/2012

Thanks brother, such high praise like that uplifts me. Thanks for the read...

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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