Transcending Love


  • JonTalbain
  • Didn't I tell you, what I believe... Did somebody say that....that love like that won't last? Didn't I give you all that I got to, give baby?

Transcending Love

My dear, what is it that brings me to my knees
humbled by such a passionate magnificence that lingers in your eyes
What is that makes my soul shiver in the winds of your voice
How can my soul search yours and be hung from your lips as if I were a condemned man
Tormented is my passion, that I cannot see past the falling rain that are my tears
Being near to you, is all that matters, and from you i have more love than I've ever seen

I've never known such a powerful hunger, a rapacious need without the desire to bed
and yet I've held you, artfully stroked you in powerful rhythm, but I still need more and more and more
How is it, that I drown in the delicacy of love between a man and a woman, and how it is I cannot survive a breath without you
why is it I feel more love than I've ever seen
How is it, that winds of change come pouring into my life now, when I needed you as much as you to me?

And so I walk the roads of destitution, with no one that I can truly feel this way about?
the heated thoughts eat of my desolatie spirit, rent nude by my deprivation to the one passion that is unearthly, unyielding and dare I say unholy
for such a power to come from a man is most ungodly
Who could feel such a more powerful passion that even The Christ himself  could not compare
and All I want to do now is take you into arms, admist the maelstrom, dead or dying, living or trying to live and just hold you
To tell you I'd never leave you
I want nothing more than to kiss those plush lips
I can do without grabbing your hips, though I know that my soul will cry out for you
and you would hear me, if you would you dare to
By the moonlight high in the sky
dancing high in the heaven, before the gods
and before all of man, I could lay amidst the clouds and make you se that before all creation
It is you and it can only be you,
for such a love could not be human and if it is, then how can I be worthy of you?
More love than I've ever seen, in my soul you've all I got and all that I need

What is it again? What is it about  you that rocks me down to the very core of my soul? That shakes me down even in the very depths of Hell and before Jehovah God above
How can you be all that my soul needs, and despite my fears of being without you, my need of you to the point of addiction
and uncontrollable urge to place my flesh with your flesh, that I can feel so serene
More than what I need to feel, but I bathe in it... relish it... need it
and my love
You're all I got in this world, and your all that I need
More love than I ever seen
My dear, If love transcended time and space,
then please know that I will forever feel this way

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InfinityKnott commented on Transcending Love


Powerfully fabulous! Amazingly passionate, hnoest, & romantic.

Rygar commented on Transcending Love


man o man. i know these feelings all to well, very descriptive, and powerful, the lost love is felt on the page. great job!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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My Truth 1
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Come 1
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When Love Truly Awakens 2
Transcending Love 3
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A lost soul 0
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??? 0
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Empty 0
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unsure 1
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