Transform

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    Transform

    Wet words, dry ears, vocal chords, ear drum,
    dark walls, bright clothes, somber, fearsome,
    small girls, small guys, red eyes, too bright,
    One girl, two guys, boxer, pool guy,

    small world, small purse, high heels, transform,
    tall girls, small guys, small shirts, transform,
    Big guys, still cheap, tall girls, still seek,
    Bouncer, stoner, fighter, loner,

    Dresses- too small, stairwell- “too tall”,
    5 guys- 9 eyes, one eye- winking,
    4 guys- one thigh, one guy- thinking,
    Clutch is, too small, this is, whose fault?

    Neck chain, no cash, ear-ring, plenty
    One sip, two sips, corner pocket,
    Eye ball, rolling, passer, strolling,
    half on, half off, “booty”, showing,

    Pool game, over, new game, “Lady,”
    One cat, one dog, two dogs, twenty,
    Pressure, compete, one dog, angry,
    One fight, two fight, knock out,
    “a drink?”
    One man, with girl, they all, want him,
    Bathroom, solo, waiting, vulture,
    Black wings, sea-gulls, sea shore, Jersey,
    Black-flys, “‘squitos”, termites, hurry!

    Alco-holic, centre frolic,
    Big men brawling, knockout, “brolic,”
    Savage, scary, bleeding, hairy,
    Mad girls, teething, for him standing,

    Bouncer, police, “get out – ladies”
    Bloody, hyper, water for free,
    Technique, perfect, elbows, knee caps,
    Knuckle, “slitten,” painful, seeping,

    Jesus, Walk-eth, in a speaker,
    A cross, across, sinners dark chest,
    Blue lights, orange, red lights – arrest!

    Shy girls, tall drinks, tall smokes, transform,
    Wild girls, drunk guys, outside, transform,
    Sober eyes,
    ………yet all 3s are supposed to be 10s at closing time.


    (E.M.)

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    vanessa411 commented on Transform

    06-26-2009

    wow... you got me reading going 'damn, this dude knows what he's talking about... i love poems like this.... rock on !

    ReDDwarf2022 commented on Transform

    06-22-2009

    you forgot a dash of salt and a pinch of pepper to make a cake to feed the world. (do people use pepper in cake?) nah just kidding, words thats all i need to say. dont stop.

    castlemist commented on Transform

    06-20-2009

    I loved the beat and rhythm in this. It was like a mosaic of a night in a bar through the eyes of someone messed up...good work!

    tsgirl commented on Transform

    06-16-2009

    very artistic,I was looking at a movie in every word I read,that was powerful all the way to the end. Wow ! you go Beverly Hills you're invited to read my poems also. I can't wait to read your other one and other one and other lol. 1 luv

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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