TRUE LOVE

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    TRUE LOVE



    True love has never been shown at first sight

    has not been hidden by shame or not even by fear 

    to someone who knows about it
    but never mentioned it.


    I have my name but it doesn't ring the bell

    It's a melody, when I call  your name.

     
    Someone was everything that I saw

    and almost everything that I looked at.


    Was not hatred how I felt,

    but instead I felt fear to show love

    it's because, I am in love

    just afraid to be loved.



    AIXA







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    rollerderby commented on TRUE LOVE

    10-12-2009

    Love can be our greatest gift and our greatest curse, it all depends on which sideof your heart it falls on. I hope yoursis always on the side that brings sunshine into your life. Beautiful poem dear.

    AIXA

    10/15/2009

    Thanks, you made me smile! Yes, it's definitively on the pure and magic side.

    Grito commented on TRUE LOVE

    09-12-2009

    The nape of your neck, your thoughful pose, when your fingers touch, your grasp of the pen, like the perfect yellow orange color when a mango is just right, to the call of your name, these are reflected when I think of you, as I sit here and of you I write.

    AIXA

    12/04/2009

    You are my true Love!!!

    laydbak1 commented on TRUE LOVE

    09-11-2009

    Yes, love is a complicated thing... But, loving someone is also the easiest and simplest thing anyone could ever do... You just have to take out the politics, jealousy, power trips, attitudinal over-kill, and threat of infidelity... Hmmm... I think I just defined complicated... lol... Great write...

    soulwriter commented on TRUE LOVE

    09-06-2009

    This is a simplistic cacophony of the perplexities of true love... in a few words "I Loved your outlook" .... Your avenues for love to exist is well written.

    AIXA

    09/06/2009

    Can you writte again the comment in my poem, I deleted by mistake, but I placed back. Thanks

    AIXA

    09/06/2009

    Now you can see the version in Spanish called AMANDOTE

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    AIXA’s Poems (45)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    A FREE SPIRIT CALLED "AIXA" 0
    TO GRITO 0
    Loving in Silence 0
    TO THE ETERNAL "GRITO" 5
    You, my Bright Star! 2
    WHAT YOU MEAN TO ME 8
    MAGIC BUTTERFLIES 3
    A POEM 1
    You the Firefly... 1
    Alphabetical Thoughts 2
    THE APACHE PROMISE 7
    THE CURSE 4
    POETRY WITH YOU 4
    ONE LAST BREATH... 2
    PONCE DE LEON 4
    NENEIS!!! 3
    TO "GRITO" THE POET! 6
    A NEW LOVE 9
    A MOURNING STAR... 2
    ERES 2
    AMANDOTE 3
    TRUE LOVE 4
    YOUR BODY PARTS 3
    'ANGELICA" 1
    THE FUCHSIA ROSE 2
    THAT NIGHT… 1
    LOVE SPELL 8
    PLAY WITH ME 4
    SAVE ME 2
    SI DECIDES AMARME 3
    IF YOU LOVE ME 11
    TRUE SMILE 5
    TRUE SMILE END 2
    A FEATHER IN THE WIND 21
    CELESTIAL BOND 12
    MY OTHER HALF 3
    I love my Dad 7
    INNOCENT CHILD 18
    Lost a Loved One 13
    I asked God for you 14
    Being inside of you 20
    Close to you 9
    Envejecere a tu lado (Spanish) 7
    Seeing through your soul 10
    I will age by YOUR SIDE 19