TRUTH OR DARE

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  • Anger
    • blackfootlady
    • Friends Gather in hope.It's Faith that leads them to Destiny!

    Poem Commentary

    I wrote this because there so many angery people amongst us in life.I just feel If they were told maybe they have better thing to work with.Anger to Me is just not an answer.

    TRUTH OR DARE

    In all Your Rage and Anger You Express.
    There is no Harmony;For Your in this mess.
    It is just because I do love You so...
    One  moment I would just like to know.
    Life is not an instant reply.
    It does not ask for You to lye...
    For Wisdom is guided by peace or quiet.
    Not by Your cruel jokes You find a riot.
    Today no longer will You hurt My Heart.
    So do not even try it or even start.
    This is the Day I let You Know.
    Your the One that needs to grow.
    Anything cruel You ever knew grew old.
    Bitter words iced over to fit Your new mold.
    Now it is My hand folded in truth or dare.
    For Even Love cannot be guided by fear.
    Our friendship mean more to Me...
    Truth or dare just let this be until You can see.

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    MarionYost commented on TRUTH OR DARE

    11-28-2010

    again, This is a great emotionally driven piece. Great job. all the best -Marion-

    blackfootlady

    11/28/2010

    Marion the best to You too.I'm so please Your still writing.TY for Your comment-Love-Black

    kdarcy commented on TRUTH OR DARE

    08-09-2010

    One should settle for very little, if anything at all but, life isn't perfect and to be accepting is good too, enough is enough. Nice write, be well

    Rhymer commented on TRUTH OR DARE

    08-07-2010

    Excellent write, the message is very clear..........................10

    blackfootlady

    08/07/2010

    Why Ty Rhymer,I hope everything going well.It's been a while.

    cheronld commented on TRUTH OR DARE

    08-07-2010

    The picture is different but the message still rings clear....sometimess we have to be reminded more than once...lol...Cher

    blackfootlady

    08/07/2010

    I don't understand how this poem came up twice either,lol

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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