• Wakeitha
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Try

Look at me

He's looking right down at me

I look like something small

compare to him

starring down at me

see, see, see

face myself

look at me

I said,

look at me

when sin wrap itself around me

look at me

I don't care

look at me

HELP

sometime life seems like its not fare

look at me

when sin wrap itself around me

it makes me not care

I am not giving up

it make a different to me

someone special

looking down at me

told me he do

CARE
He's looking down at me
cause he's the one
and the only one
that can
make
mold
and
help
me
causes he really
loves me and care
Look at me!

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cheronld commented on Try

10-02-2011

Lol....its funny but I felt that I was looking down and going further down as I read this.....like I was chasing someone....lol....it brought me right into the poem regardless and for that I am grateful....it was a treat to read and loved the style you used to frame it.....Cher

Wakeitha

10/05/2011

Thank you and may God bless you.

inkmaster commented on Try

09-29-2011

very nice i liked the flow off you poem........inkmaster

Wakeitha

10/05/2011

Thank you and may God bless you.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Wakeitha’s Poems (68)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Supernatural Love 1
My Love(Pt.3) 3
My Love(pt.2) 1
My Love (part 1) 3
Inner-Beauty 16
Daily Inspiration(D
ay12)
0
Trust 3
Father's Day 1
Shekinah Glory Cloud 6
Sing 1
Daily Inspirational
(Day 11)
0
Daily Inspiratinal(
Day 10)
0
Reality 2
Daily Inspiration(D
ay 9)
2
Time 1
Break The Cycle 9
Freedom 1
Heart Ache 9
FORGIVE MYSELF 8
Daily Inspiration(D
ay 7)
0
Daily Inspiration (Day 8) 0
Daily Inspiration(D
ay 6)
0
Daily Inspiration(D
ay 5)
1
Daily inspiration(d
ay 4)
1
Daily Inspiration(3
)
3
Daily Inspiration(D
ay 2)
1
Daily inspiration(D
ay 1)
8
Sea Shore 2
Big Sis/Little Sis 1
Rattle Snake 1
screaming 1
Compare 1
Tame the Animal 1
Word Faucet 1
frustrated 3
(?) 6
DREAM 0
Fight 0
Searching 4
No, Limit 7
Thank You 2
Try 2
A talk with Jesus 0
I Need Thee (GOD) 0
Tangle Up 1
Chosen 2
Build a Relationship 0
Fallen Short 0
A Calm Voice 2
SIGNS! 15
Widerness 4
Wake Up 1
Grace 5
About Me 2
Breath Of Life 5
PAIN 1 4
A HOLY KISS 2
Weeping 2
The Moment 3
What 3
Precious Moment 3
Heart Beat 2
Hurt 3
Give Up 2
Peace 6
Bride 4
My Love 4
Know 6