• Devotion


    Inside, outside, bleeding

    All this time

    You were feeding

    Taste the lime

    Twisted emotion

    Sour and tart

    Total devotion

    Ripped apart

    This struggle I toss

    Turn around

    I feel the loss

    And hear no sound

    Left behind

    I leave you there

    In my mind

    I do not care

    Raped my heart

    Ever so slow

    From the start

    Screaming “NO!”

    Still you poke

    And play your game

    Through the smoke

    Scream my name

    Keep your hell

    Live it now

    I’ll do it well

    I know how

    Because I’ve vanished

    Into the dark

    And have banished

    Your evil mark

    And hidden lies

    Have disappeared

    Because I’m wise

    And I’m feared

    Deep inside

    You can run but can not hide…..

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    EinStud commented on twisted


    I just had to check out this poem to see if you have the flow in your other works, and of course you do. I feel a "Free Style" rapper is born here, because you will choose not to rhyme at times and the flow still goes. -EinStud

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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