Twisted

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A twisted freestyle poem I wrote. I hope you guys like it.

Twisted

These rooms, these walls, this place I do not know
It sucks me in; you pull me back out
These doors, these windows; nothing can be seen
I stand alone, and yet you are near

These drugs, these drugs, they release me
They take me away from here
To a place, to a time, that I used to love

I am fucked, you are fucked, the world is totally lost
You must go, you must run... Save yourself
My soul is dark, my heart is black; you are my light
Run so far; until I am gone; a faded memory

This twisted body, and my twisted mind
taints my twisted heart
I saw that light, within you, I still ripped you apart.
You and I, we are one, no longer human beings

I'm not twisted, I'm not dark, I'm what you want to be
I'm that entity, who fell apart
I'm everything you can hope to see

These rooms, padded rooms, I'm really not that crazy
This doctor, this needle, this arm...
He pokes me once, he pokes me again
and now the lights go out......

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SuperChick76 commented on Twisted

10-04-2009

I love that light line. Idk, it just struck me. The poem isn't as good as some of your others. Idk, lacks the originality of some of her others. But it's still nicely written. Loved it.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Life 1
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