Twisted

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    Okay... this one got out of hand... It started simply with a pun of the title, but I couldn't think of any plot that seemed twisted... So, I rambled on and on... Maybe it characterizes the ankle, I don't know... I just know that I don't, and that simply sums up this poem...

    Twisted

     What cruel world may inhabit mine
    when all I've known's lost form
    well maybe not so, but it feels as though
    my life has left it's norm
    No longer near, but distant
    What cruelty that's existed
    For what started with me, has span out to be
    A treacherous task of the twisted

    It started as most things might
    and in what would seem an honest way
    then an accident occurs, and without another word
    the terror trys to ruin my day
    And in truth or in fact
    or in adrenaline or in spite
    (it may have been false and a lack of fore-sight)
    And everyone says it'll be alright

    A world out of order
    across from it's border
    insanity smiles
    running for miles
    can't take a break
    it finally breaks
    can't take the stress
    give it my best
    best doesn't take
    it finally breaks
    it wasn't my fault
    thought into my vault
    of my mind
    one of a kind
    never been done
    never was fun

    The following message
    was sent to the brain
    it came from the ankle
    who was twisted in pain...

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    Charlie23 commented on Twisted

    01-20-2010

    This is very cool, enjoying your humor, as well as the rythem and flow of your poem! Great Job!
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