Two friends in me

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    Two friends in me
    There exist two friends in me
    One is Mind and the other is Heart

    Mind     visits the places never visited,
    it risks itself for any adventure,
    it leaps ranges, swims oceans,
    no sea is left uncrossed,
    no desert is left unseaerched,
    just for the pleasure of Heart.

    And Heart takes all the pleasure
    no point seems a seizure.
    It smiles, giggles and laughs
    as having found all the treasure.
    It inspires Mind to risk more
    as if one needs the other more.

    There exist two friends in me
    One is Mind and the other is Heart

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    lucky62 commented on Two friends in me

    10-21-2009

    This is unique a very thoughtful comparison of our loving intelligent natures.........
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    dumplin commented on Two friends in me

    10-06-2009

    How descriptive and true. I like this very much. Thank you for sharing.
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    knight4696 commented on Two friends in me

    10-03-2009

    Sufie - a nice job with this. You capture the connection between heart and mind to a tee. Nice work
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    Sufie

    10/03/2009

    the connection makes one realize the human self....i hope u think the same..?

    knight4696

    10/03/2009

    Yes, indeed I do.

    MsHangtime commented on Two friends in me

    09-30-2009

    this is a really good poem. its poetic even tho it doesn't rhyme. this poem speaks volumes and is the truth plain and simple.
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    Sufie

    10/01/2009

    Critical appreciation is always appreciated.Thanks

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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