Two Lovers


  • Passion

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    I made this using the poetry challenge on the poetry boards

    Two Lovers

    Two Lovers...
    Hot, Sweaty, Intertwined,
    Heavy Breathing, Hearts Beating,
    Passionate Words, A Loving Caress,
    Two Bodies Come Together,
    Held Captive In A Dance Of Old,
    A Tale Wrought By Two Lovers,
    Whose Stories Are Left Untold.

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    ginga commented on Two Lovers


    Alexis, A sweet passionate poem to leave the reader wondering! Ginga

    devaamido commented on Two Lovers


    Great idea: The poem quickly builds in passionate crescendo & just when you've got the reader hooked on "what's next?", you leave whatever"s next to the reader's imagination...saying it's "untold". GREAT!

    jademelissa74 commented on Two Lovers


    You manage to display the sensual feelings well. It is a well-written poem! .

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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