Two Sided Story

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    Two Sided Story

    I saw you today
    and you didn't even look my way

    I tried to call but you acted
    as if you had nothing to say
    I wanted you to hold me
    and say its alright

    but all i heard was i have to go
    its racing night

    i made a promise
    to love you til the end
    they say that day happens for everyone

    i count the days when

    happiness is just a phase
    and love was its dream

    i feel like a cup of old coffee
    with a drop of expired cream

    sadness has become by bay
    and his arms window

    have i asked for to much that
    life
    gaves me so little

    I saw you ask me for more
    when i walked out the door

    i cried why

    you said i was the only faith that
    gave you belief in the truth and a lie

    and when my tears started to fall
    you asked if you could catch not just one but all

    I asked you if it seem to late
    cause i couldn't tell if this love had become real or just a fake

    You looked me in the eyes
    and i could see your tears start to fall
    you backed into a wall

    I couldn't stay mad
    cause all we do is this
    maybe we'll just call it
    what it is
    a day of hit and miss

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    PRober commented on Two Sided Story

    07-21-2009

    well done, a different slant on an optimist's chant!

    bforibus commented on Two Sided Story

    03-28-2009

    very unique write . to an universsal experience. great job. you are a great poet. thank you for sharing your stuff

    dangedmanjr commented on Two Sided Story

    03-28-2009

    sounds like your hubby is missin!

    JEAGLEFEATHER commented on Two Sided Story

    03-26-2009

    This is a great poem. Like love, it is the mix between bliss or sorrow, or hit and miss! Keep writing!

    josephbivin commented on Two Sided Story

    03-26-2009

    Very deep and meaningful. Brings a tear to the eye. Very Good!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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