Two

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    Two

     Which one am I today
    The who will calmly stay
    Or the one who will rashly say
    The night was made for spontaneity

    Believe in me means believing in who
    Don’t meander around the truth
    I need to know where I stand
    Escaping from here seemed like a good plan

    Devil’s advocating leaving it alone
    While my bones tell me to just go home
    Stuck in between with a judge staring at me
    Can he really understand how I feel or believe

    Believe in me means believing in who
    Don’t meander around the truth
    I need to know where I stand
    Escaping from here seemed like a good plan

    Take it back a step
    Before I would have leapt
    Without looking at the consequence of me
    Or not having a soul to tell my tragedy

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    icu2 commented on Two

    01-07-2010

    Got to get a grip on things, and never ever follow a whim or feeling. Know the facts...consequences are real and delt to all who play the game of chance. Good write my friend.
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