Unable to Survive

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  • Sadness

    Unable to Survive
    The days are passing by slower than before
    But with each day comes a new open door
    Darkness comes as the light begins to fade
    You left when I wish you would have stayed
    Life is nothing without you
    If you’re gone what am I to do
    Time and life are slipping away
    Without you my life loses another day
    If you are not here
    Death will come quickly I fear
    Because with you I am truly alive
    But without you I am unable to survive

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    Edge commented on Unable to Survive

    01-26-2009

    This poem is really beautiful. I've felt this way before but your poem put it into perfect words.
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    shattered commented on Unable to Survive

    01-16-2009

    SHORT AND SIMPLE.... I LIKE IT, GETS TO THE MEANING FAST... :)
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