Unattainable

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    Unattainable



    My desire is you,
    I long for you,
    want for you
    I dream of you,
    streams of you.

    My thoughts taken captive by your presence, my fantasy. What to do with you, am I worthy to possess this rare thing. Your pedestal so high, I fear bringing you down, for what will become of me if all my dreams are fulfilled, nothing left to chase after, what would be left to wish after if I have the ultimate treasure, no, I can’t possess you, but I must pursue you. My pursuit gives me hope of reaching the unreachable, seeing the unseeable, so I must chase after you, just for a glance, a touch, the sound of your smile, a taste of your presence, the fragrance of your skin, I breathe you. A moment with you is worth an eternity, I live in my memories of you, in my world where you are the sun, you give me life. You are diamond, you are emerald, you are ruby, you are precious jade, you are black beauty. I will lift you up, I will cherish you, I will protect you, for you are my heartbeat. Without you, I am not.

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    mdpoetgirl commented on Unattainable

    06-18-2009

    This is such a beautiful love poem. So innocent and full of emotion. Your passion for this woman you love is very evident, and I love the flow and rhythm of the poem.

    4Him

    06/18/2009

    i appreciate that. I've always found pleasure in discussing the things that I love.

    zionleel commented on Unattainable

    02-07-2009

    This was coo. I like the comsuming sense.

    4Him

    06/14/2009

    thank you. i try to portray my feelings acurately.

    Paradice21 commented on Unattainable

    01-29-2009

    All I can say is this is really hot! yOU HAVE TOUCH MY HEART. This IS A NICE, AND BEAUTIFUL POEM HERE!

    4Him

    06/14/2009

    Thank you. I am pleased to see that you were moved by it.

    Corinna commented on Unattainable

    01-20-2009

    A man giving in to unconditional love. Being consumed by the emotion. Nice.

    4Him

    06/14/2009

    thank you. it really is the only way I know how to love. fully and completely.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    4Him’s Poems (9)

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    Reflections 1
    fantasy 3
    I touched a dream.... 2
    desire.... 1
    Unattainable 5
    from the root.... 2
    Silent Screams 3
    Violent Symphony 1