The Red Bridge

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I will leave this peculiar poem entirely up to the reader's interpretation, although as far as I can read, I think I've created quite a riveting existential perspective on that fine line between being truly alive and quasi-dead. What is that warm bridge between death and birth? And why does it have to end?? Are they two realities? One enclosed and one exposed?

The Red Bridge

The path is slick like oil, red carpet like wet velvet
And on this mellow field I writhe, a blind, ringed earthworm
I undulate, a rotating tumor, four limbed, the ends to a means
licking the beet-like sugar, bubbles fizzle like cola; I am a fish
I am a metamorphosis, in a salty pool, where Dead Sea rhymes
cannot contain my vivacity, swimming, like a fry, a small cognizant fry


What is this place? A window to a world untouched, muted
Questions quell themselves, green with envy, magic buds liquid life
A core throbs, quaking atop my head, coffee hairs float, in a red sea
Deep gulps, turgid veins, ivory spine, morphing in a malleable shell
Shadows flicker across the belly screen, phantasms grin and growl
Synchronized blinks, a beam, the brightness lurid; I am a speck.


A slimed architecture, bathed in bizarre redolence, a yeasty odor,
Dulcet mesentery garden, grand eloquence, in a sheath of life I curl
Quiet and kinetic, slobbering on thumb, a tactile creation,
a mermaid underwater, climbing towards a colder reality,
Why has it been made that I must depart, my comfort crushed?
I wade and slither, secure in seclusion, in my Eutopian hearth


An unclothed compilation, enfolded in layers, wrapped cellophane skin,
Plato’s cave is kind; shapes frolic boisterous in the rose dark, elated!
How clever are these cleaves, the perfect pinch, an aperture that
awaits, mucous membraned, a tapered trail leading to bright white
I don't want to leave, my ticket first class was cut in two,
somehow in this bloody cavern, where a fuse nourishes,
latched to pink gum laced with bright blue thread


I do not know why I am here, a rubbered cork ready to be corked
a sting in skin, a live form, a wiggling figure in volumetric breath
whining in red smoke of creation, apprehensive, my sentence looms
O bittersweet kismet, this pit and pendulum swing do not creak
well enough, the fruit of my labor is fruitless, cells coalesce, harden
rebuttal is toxic, the wound I reside in quivers, the red fruit aches


I am the seed. My crown pounds the thick soil.
The grains must break as water to oil.
The beautiful dream is through. I am appalled.
Excised from an apple, out the worm crawled
squirming, ripped from most placid sleep!
Into rough palms I fell, a little black sheep



Out in a cinch, on like a light switch, I sway, side to side,
pushed through the hot red fire; Andro taps the jar,
burly hands pry, the sac’s mortal innards shake, and...
sliding down the alley of New
I am expelled into the cryptic air: scraped from a perfect tomb, 
aquatic skinned, trembling in the resounding din
a hapless, wailing excrement, doomed to death
with a corpulent pair of toed fins


Ready to begin

Prepared to end.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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