unconditional

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    unconditional

    an untold salvation
    to my unswept past
    of constant weeding-
    crawling seasons
    wishing and freezing
    freedom hands washed-
    intended to be
    left for winter cold-
    falling back on
    old sayings
    of faithful truth
    that we will be
    held accountable-
    instant denial
    finding rest in
    blind spots and
    finite reflections
    aid a final release of
    all shattered minds to
    piece together
    wild arrangements
    of classic embraces
    as we fall into
    the final
    grace

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    monkyntz commented on unconditional

    05-03-2009

    awesome piece,i too love the ending it says it all

    stephenmichael commented on unconditional

    04-09-2009

    I see broken things when I read this... Things unfinished,Things hidden fro ourselves and others in "The Blind Spots" We supposably are able to take refuge in...I feel this is life in quick motion and life undone then to the final graces...I like this one alot simplypeace...Stephen ...10...

    kenparme commented on unconditional

    04-08-2009

    This is a great poem-love the flow.

    Madelynn commented on unconditional

    04-03-2009

    Another One.I can almost taste that last part about the final grace.Very reflective.Honest.You have a bright future young lady.

    WordSlinger commented on unconditional

    03-25-2009

    My fav line wild arrangements of classic embraces

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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