unconditional condition

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IN MEMORY OF A FRIEND LESLIE VENTERS WHO STILL LIVES BUT NOW IS ALONE...JUST WAITING FOR THE DAY WHEN THE LORD WILL TAKE HIM HOME ...TO BE REUNITED WITH THE ONLY LOVE HE'D EVER KNOWN...DEVOTED HUSBAND FOR SO VERY LONG....IF AND WHEN HE HAD TO LEAVE HIS WIFE'S SIDE IT WAS NECESSARY AND ONLY FOR A VERY SHORT TIME..ANTISIPATING A QUICK RETURN...IN THE POEM I STATED THREE YEARS BUT ACTUALLY IT WAS FOR AROUND 15 YEARS
A HUSBAND FIRST THEN A FATHER AND A GRANDFATHER AND GREAT GRANDFATHER...THE WORDS GRAND...GREAT AND FATHER ARE A SMALL DEPECTION OF HIS ETERNAL LOVE FOR HIS WIFE AND DEVOTION TO HER...I HAVE ONLY KNOWN HIM FOR AROUND 15 YEARS IF EVERYONE HAD WHAT HE HAD INSIDE...THIS WOULD BE A BETTER WORLD...IT HAS BEEN A PRIVLIAGE TO HAVE KNOW HIM..

QUALIN

 

 

unconditional condition

I GAZE OUT THE WINDOW KNOWING FREEDOM'S THERE
FOR THREE YEARS NOW IVE BEEN HERE WITHOUT ONE SINGLE CARE
FOR I KNOW YOU WOULD BE HERE JUST THE SAME IF IT WERE ME
LOCKED WITHIN YOUR MIND OH SO HELPLESSLY
BUT I REMEMBER YOU AND THE LOVE UNCONDITIONALLY
UP BEFORE DAWN CARING FOR THE CHILDREN AND FOR ME
BEAUTIFUL YOU WERE THEN AND WILL ALWAYS BE
LOCKED WITHIN YOUR MIND HOW IT HURTS TO SEE
EVEN THO YOU LAY THERE YOU ARE MY HEART..MY LOVE..MY PRIDE
IT'S STILL JUST LIKE THE FIRST TIME.YOU WALKED SO PROUDLY BY MY SIDE

GOD GAVE YOU TO ME FOR BETTER OR FOR WORST..
LOVING YOU HAS BEEN A BLESSING JUST LIKE THE WRITTEN VERSE
A VERTUIOUS WOMAN GRATER THAN ANY PRECIOUS STONE
LOST IN YOUR MIND NOW YOU'LL NEVER BE ALONE
EVERY NOW AND THEN I SEE THE GLITTER IN YOUR EYE
AS THE FIRST TIME I WATCHED..AS YOU WENT STROLLING BY
THAT GLIMPSE EVERY NOW I SEE THAT TWINKLE IN YOUR EYE                                                                                                                  IS WORTH MORE TO ME
THAN ALL THE RIGHIES ONE COULD BUY
IN SICKNESS YOUR MY LOVE
AND IN HEALTH...LIKE THE STARS ABOVE
SO MANY REASONS...SO MANY REASONS..FOR MY "UNCONDITINAL LOVE"...

I'LL BE HERE MY LOVE ALWAYS BY YOUR SIDE
I KNOW YOUR THERE SOMEWHERE WAY DOWN DEEP INSIDE 
GOD KNOWS THE REASON... NOT FOR  ME TO UNDERSTAND 
YOUR STILL HERE ..I CAN STILL HOLD YOUR HAND
WHEN YOU HAVE TO LEAVE ME THERE ARE THOSE IN MY POSITION
UNTILL THAT DAY ILL CHERRISH YOU AND MY "UNCONDITIONAL CONDITION".....QUALIN    


JULY 26TH 2009

 

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angle commented on unconditional condition

06-29-2010

These poems are very good. So far all of these are good.

Qualin

07/06/2010

WELL I THINK YOU ...YOU HILLBILLY ANGLE!!

RareNecessity commented on unconditional condition

03-26-2010

This is the essence of spiritual breath. When the body is gone, the soul remains with us, every moment , every second, in the now. Love...love...love..unconditional love....Peace,love and the breath of tender pleasures sent your way. ~RN

Qualin

04/18/2010

WHAT A WONDERFUL COMMENT FROM A REAL POET,AND UNCONDITIONAL FRIEND!!!!

MissIvy commented on unconditional condition

02-06-2010

A very nice and moving write, thank you for sharing this.

Qualin

04/18/2010

MISSIVY CANT THINK OF ANY THING TO SAY EXCEPT "MISSIVY" FOR IF EVERYONE HAS READ YOU IT WILL EXPLAIN WHY I SAY...MISSIVY THANKS YOUR FRIEND

laydbak1 commented on unconditional condition

08-11-2009

This is a deeply touching, and passionately honest tribute and testament to loving the right one, Qualin... Good write...

Qualin

04/18/2010

COMING FROM A SUPURB WRITER I AM HONORED TO HAVE THIS CHANCE TO EXPRESS MY FEELINGS AND TO HAVE PEOPLE LIKE YOU TO CALL FRIEND....FRIEND!!!

cynthiakehl commented on unconditional condition

07-30-2009

Powerful write! Beautiful, each word, captured me, my heart , my emotions,....pure love.

Qualin

06/12/2010

There are those that you secretly admire,I don't guess the one this was written about has read it and, this is actually my first time,I think I will share it with his daughter...and thank you for your comment I'm honored coming from you...Your Friend ualin

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

Qualin’s Poems (22)

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WHAO ! UNTO YOU DOCTOR 18
THE UNDISPUTED KING 8
CLOSED FOR REPAIR 16
The Squeeze Box Boy 16
PEPPIE SAYS HELLO 9
DON'T MESS WITH FAT LUCY 14
"CAN'T YOU JUST FEEL IT" 6
ON PREASTERS LAKE 25
IF YOU EVER SEE AN ELEPHANT!!!!! 15
DON'T FORGET THE MILK AND BREAD 4
OLE' MULESKINNERS.
...JACKASS
6
THE LORD OUR FRIEND...CHRI
ST JESUS
7
A LOVE THAT'S MEANT TO BE 7
THE DAY MY DADDY PRAYED 11
THE WIND SURLEY BLOWS 3
HERE ON "OLE GLORY" 4
A VERY SPECIAL FRIEND 14
having you in my site 5
PASSION OF THE MOMENT 6
MY MOST SPECIAL DAY 6
unconditional condition 8
ESOTERIC TEARS 7