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Love you uncovered inch by inch


Brace your feet and strike the sky
Alter dream within bulls eye

Pristine waters of untapped springs
Shower changes fullest swing

I, in mind, peel you slowly
Until I reach in you the holy

Each encounter a new substratum
Unleashing urge to merge momentum

Paint for us originality
Revealing life's immortality

Howl and bay at the standing moon
Until emotions awaken monsoon

Drawn up into outer skies
With both hands seize the prize

You, my living archeological dig
For you I grew the wildest fig

Covering what is uncovered
The you is safely now being discovered

Graceladymn 8/8/09

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queenrosered commented on UNCOVERED


I really loved this piece Grace! Your phrasing is a delight and it takes time and effort to read and get to the depth and esscence of much of your work ( not unlike the "archeological dig") but like that too, is the pleasure of the discovery in your meaning and intent.Very nicely (and poetically) done! Thanks! (applauding now) :)



Thank you Rose, it truly does work both ways, the discovering. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Heartfelt commented on UNCOVERED


So much passion in your writing and a writing style I haven't really encountered before. I'm beginning to like you and your writing very much.



Thank you for enjoying my writings they flow from the heart.

1BlackPope commented on UNCOVERED


Another very free feeling and alot of me this poem also....I defintely think you have a disguishing style of writng...!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

graceladymn’s Poems (66)

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From the Heart Alone 4
Frank Talk 1
Do Self 4
Healing of Folly 1
Spirit 5
Empower the Center 4
Field Unfolding 3
Yet From Afar 3
Unharnessed 7
Abstract Portraitives 3
Soul of Release 2
Read Me 4
Mystery of Penetration 2
Splendid Raindrops 3
Angel of Comfort 1
Reach 6
Thoughts before sleep 6
Fullness That I Am 1
Crushed Sands 1
So 0
Poured 2
A Taste for Him 1
Feather-veins of Gold 2
Get to the Core 3
Hint of Hidden Processes 0
It Is What It Is 0
Celestial Beauty 1
No Water 1
A Trace of Surrealism 1
Empty and Void at Last 0
Trembling Flames Licked Clean 2
Song of a Hidden Flower 1
Sleep Sweetly 2
Lost Love take two 1
Lost Love take one 0
Let's Go To The River 1
I Think Not 0
Creative Romp 0
Temple of Your Thoughts 2
Covered 2
Creation Is Not Forgot 4
Not Moved 1
You will see me there 0
Him She Does Not Forget 2
Toe to Toe 2
Atoms of Stars 2
Dreams That Tease 2
Steadfast It Holds 1
Beyond Sheltering Peaks 4
Rare the Glimpse 5
Mindbalance of Unification 5
Tender of Creation 2
Internal Efferent 3
Gentle Night 8
Weakness of the Fury 6
Facing Divine Love 4
Spring 3
Guardian of the Well 10
Born To Union 11
Poets Reach 7
Serenity 9
A Place to Start 6