undeclared love

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    finish the poem with your version of the ending...I will chose one and give you credit... if you have other changes , run them by me first if you don't like this idea, don't participate

    undeclared love

    then he fell back with a thud.

    he looked at his clothes

    covered with mud..

    he had lost her forever...

    of that, he was sure..

    for what he had done,

    there was no cure

    what had caused this event

    he could not explain

    but he had to find out,

    this was truly insane

    it had all started

    the night before

    innocent enough, though

    just a walk by the shore

    they had held hands,

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    MootPoint commented on undeclared love

    08-19-2013

    They had held hands, Sensations of her touch Her laugh, her scent, her smile Deeply felt a desire for her so much Was this so wrong to be with her He with a burden responsibility She devoted to another Would this lead to infidelity?

    Mandi

    09/07/2013

    in thoughts only

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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