UNDER HEAVEN’S BLUE VEIL

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UNDER HEAVEN’S BLUE VEIL

Through the canyon, breezes sway

Tall oak trees of shaded sun

Butterflies flit and play

Creek gurgles harmony into one

 

Short before the birth of Spring

Not far from view a Robin sings

Trees waving limbs, bid sunshine stay

Peacefully drowsy, late winter day

 

Sanctuary in mounts green brush

Meadows whisper tranquil hush

Up from the valley wind does rush

My soul awakened, refreshed by creation

 

Rare beauty before my eyes behold

Beyond a maiden fair, ten-fold

God surely favors His wondrous art

Thus glides my being, a soaring heart

 

Atop the mountain plush hills wisped

Strong air wall, clean and crisp

Voyaging eagles circle and dive

Perfection in flight, these masters thrive

 

As gusts strike sage, bowing grass on hillside

Ushered clouds move in like high tide

Heavens opaque, braided white ribbon blue 

 

Bristled limbs grasp at wind

The eagles range through canyon pass

Jasmine breeze o’er rills caress

Reflecting back the sky as liquid glass

 

Beyond the earth’s green dimpled hills

Merging luminous clouds from the sea

Their specters vast in canyons fill

Bright clouds overhead, daylight has fled

Upon the vista their shadows decree

 

No promise of rain, sun will refrain

Seeds break soil in droplets of dew

So waves the grain in wind from the plain

Timeless land under heaven’s blue veil

 

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Hampton commented on UNDER HEAVEN’S BLUE VEIL

02-13-2010

Beautifully done. A poem that sooths the soul......

Marsink

02/14/2010

It's a good thing to have a poem that is useful to soothe! Thank you, Mr. Cragg

Charlie23 commented on UNDER HEAVEN’S BLUE VEIL

02-06-2010

I feel like I just took a walk in a beautiful mountainous area, left with only my thoughts to keep my company. I agree with Sam, this poem offers a peacefulness throughout.

Marsink

02/06/2010

Hi, Charlie! Thanks for reading. (even a mediocre poem has it purpose) I'm glad you chose to comment kindly, as usual. Here's to your peace of mind

SavVySam commented on UNDER HEAVEN’S BLUE VEIL

02-05-2010

That sounds like a lovely Canyon filled with all of the promise of Spring! Thank you for allowing us to visit in the calming piece.

Marsink

02/06/2010

Thanks, Sam! (just a few more days till spring) If this calmed you, then I am glad of it!

ginga commented on UNDER HEAVEN’S BLUE VEIL

02-04-2010

Marsink, A soft whisper that magnifies the beauties of the natural world in grand style. ginga

Marsink

02/06/2010

Thanks for your chordant harmony of words to compliment my writing. I'm very appreciative, Ginga!

Oblaidon commented on UNDER HEAVEN’S BLUE VEIL

02-03-2010

Best line for me, "Reflecting back the sky as liquid glass"

Marsink

02/03/2010

Glad there was a line that was a standout. Thanks very much for your time to leave a kind comment. I appreciate it!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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