Under the stars

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    Under the stars

     midnight reflects off of your eyes as we sit and watch the stars.
    we catch a glimps of what we thought was a shooting star and wish it could be ours.
    i lean over and kiss those soft, warm lips because my wish has already come true
    i am living in the moment and its all better because i am with you.
    you keep me thinking about you even when we are together
    i am blessed to say that i can share every shooting star with you.
    many nights have been the same as this one, sitting under the stars and talking about how i feel about you
    sweat and chills run down my back when you say that you love me too
    i think about the love that we have made and it makes me feel like i am a new man
    i am glad that i can share all of this manhood and love with you and that you can understand.
    i love you for ever baby
    sincerly jonathan allen alexander

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    koolmom0 commented on Under the stars

    03-29-2010

    This is lovely, I sure hope she appreciated the messege you conveyed here. Great write. :) Kool
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    blackfootlady commented on Under the stars

    03-10-2010

    That poem is not bad,I liked it...keep writing.I gotta to tell you when I started writing nothin made sense to me.I really thought that writing poems was not for me until my cousin read some of them and told me to persue it.Never stop writing....Churv
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    kage commented on Under the stars

    03-05-2010

    I like this poem it is a straight forward about how you feel it is easy to read and worded well
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    UnoMono commented on Under the stars

    03-03-2010

    I hope she is the one for you man... Your writing is true for all guys.. keep it up..
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    dx26

    03/05/2010

    thanks, i do too

    redbloodink commented on Under the stars

    03-03-2010

    you know that your other half should read this if she hasn't.......... nice ode to your mate......... red
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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