Understand

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I wrote this when one of my boyfirend's friends told us we shouldn't be together....She really pissed me off...i punched a brick wall the next day

Understand

I may have these feelings
For someone who I may not be
Meant to be with
But it's not like I don't have
Feelings for the one
I am with
I love them both...I want them
To be happy
Weather it's with me or
Someone two thousand miles away
You simply don't trust me
My heart is being torn
And all my emotions are being
Scattered in the wind
My knuckles hurt while I write
And yet I can only think about
How good that shot of pain up my arm felt
I don't understand why I care what you say
It's my own judgment
Which I need to comprehend
Whether I listened to my heart or my head
I really don't know but...
The way you make me feel when
You told me all that bullshit
Made me wish I was dead
So in all reality aspect
I hope you are happy now
That I feel so miserable
I hate this, now just put a stake
Through my heart
And rid the world of me
If you hate me so...end
My suffering...the suffering you call life

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SuperChick76 commented on Understand

10-07-2009

Nice raw emotion. Not a lot of structure, though. "Weather I listened to my heart or my head" I think you meant "whether." Other than that, nicely written. Good job.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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