Undying Love


  • Love

    Undying Love

    By the heart I lead you

    with my love I feed you

    with my kiss I need you

    I fan your fires and quench your thirst

    I breathe you.

    Tangled in your embrace

    I study every detail of your face

    lost in you, found in this place

    I fill your aching empty space

    I become you.

    beneath the stars, enveloped by the sky

    I slowly melt into your eyes

    filled with this passion, we glow like fire flies

    like the oceans I feel you rise

    until you are here upon my shores.

    even the trees

    seem to fall to their knees

    to try to touch us, to please

    how could you ever disbelieve

    the power of this love.

    so come become one with me again

    be both my lover and my friend

    and always with honor we defend

    this undying love.

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    blackshadow commented on Undying Love


    i loved the sence of togetherness in this very warm and touching thank you



    Thank you

    poetictrisha28 commented on Undying Love


    I liked this poem very much! It is beautifully written, good job!



    Thank you for your comments

    davedinning commented on Undying Love


    love it....passion....feeling.....very good..!!!!!!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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