Unexpressed & Hidden


  • Life
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  • Confusion

    Unexpressed & Hidden

    My mouth seems to be broken

    My real feelings go unspoken

    Even if I had the chance to say

    Everything I think each day


    I wouldn't know where to begin

    How much I should pull from within

    What all I should reveal

    What from my heart I should steal


    I want to let my world be known

    I want my self pride to be blown

    I cant seem to let it out, to speak

    But my secrets have reached its peak


    I'm standing here but about to fall

    Someone needs to break down my wall

    I don’t have it in me to do so

    Don’t have the strength to let it all go


    But someway it needs to be done

    I can no longer allow myself to run

    This is ruining every bit of me

    Making the true me hard to see


    I don’t know why its so hard

    To just let down my guard

    To just spill out all that I feel

    It shouldn’t be so big of a deal


    But it is, for a reason I don’t know

    And All I hide drags me low

    I hide exactly who I am

    My reason on why here I stand

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    brokenhearted11 commented on Unexpressed & Hidden


    I just read a few of your other poems, and this was by far my favorite. The rhythm is nice, and it flows easily and smoothly. I noticed that the spelling and grammar is perfect in this poem, as compared to a few others, which I assume may have been rushed? Anyway, fantastic job getting your feelings across in such a way pleasing to the eye.



    Thank you - & Yeah every time i type these up im in a hurry lol But i just went back over all of my poems & fixed them up. Thanks (:

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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